Finally Finished Revising Chapter 15...

[silver_fox_ninja]

It seems that revising chapter 15 took me longer than I thought. I have introduced a new character into the story that seems to fit in well with the plot. I have big plans for David as I do with Shauna, but I don't intend to leave the Kaiba brother's out of the picture. Tee Hee. The scenes are becoming more intense and more true-to-life than what the story was originally written.

I think it's going to be very good once it's finished. I have another story that I started posting which is much more geared towards Yugi and Tea than the Kaiba brother's. I kinda use Mis Hap at the Game Shop as a means to break up the monotony a little. I think of it a little break so I don't get burned out on Whisper in the Trees. Mis Hap is a comedy where as Whisper is a drama.

Come to think of it, I happen to like the little break. It keeps me fresh and motivated.

I have recieved some wonderful reviews and some great insight on some of the readers that have reviewed Whisper, aka WITT. Mis Hap at the Game Shop, aka. MHATGS, is a different twist to what I have been writting. I don't have many readers that seem all that serious, but I think it's a cute stoy.

Anyway, I think I have rambled on enough.